Please complete at least a couple of creative writing courses - with grade B or better - and then attempt weekly intent features at IB. You are welcome to post in the Open Thread where you might get a lot of constructive criticism for your work.

Or try online writers'/poetry forums like Caferati (Mostly Indians writing in English) at the Ryze Business and Social network:

http://bwc-network.ryze.com/

Hello Krishna,

Thank you for "revealing" yourself :)

It is good to start like this. Some people want to attract attention by liking only full grown flowers.

I like the more small ones, the little daisies in the meadow.

Start small and practice. Eventually, reach out big.... :)

You could for instance publish your stories and poems for free on Blogger.com

And if you intend to publish them after a while, lots of possibilities are arising on the Internet to do that on your own, for instance google 'book on demand'.

Electronic books are becoming state of the art gradually.

Wish you lots of success, there is a whole market to explore!

Believe in yourself!

Looking for you
Like a raindrop seeking mother-cloud

Fighting gravity
Inside a force striking back

All these letters calling names
They will loose themselves, far before to know me

I am thundering everywhere
Hacking all the air-waves

In a flash-witnesser
I am showing a gate to our up-destiny...

Dear Krishna

Some of your imagery is really lovely.

I wonder, whenever I read promising work that's published without spellchecking, etc., why a writer distorts his or her own work and potential by not caring about details.

There's so much potential showing in this piece. I second Preity's suggestion to check out Caferati at Ryze. They can help you with the details of your creations. When you're not bound by artistic constraints, and just writing about yourself naturally, your writing has an attractive energy,

love, h

Thanks for sharing Krishna. Your poem was very beautiful.

Love, Char

Aloha Krishna

I was listening to C2C where Maria Coffey shared about extreme sports where the athletes pushed their abilities to experience the ultimate realm. When one of the wives experienced her husbands presence, who had passed earlier that day climbing a mountain, it Spiritual Guru shared it was because she was resting on her back with her hands crossed on her chest.

I am sharing this because I noticed you have a Masters in Computers. I love what the Japanese have done in marketing electronic games. Maybe you will find a place to heal the many hearts that given up equating right with reality, and ignoring the other presence that is always guiding us. The Angels are here, getting the meek ready:) We are fractal intelligent. love patty

Krishna,
I like that your poetry is not perfect because it has more texture giving my brain muscles new cadence to follow. Thanks for the references to Nature...very romantic! Romance is omnipresent when attuned with nature.

Trish~~